Zerobeam's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Ninja Collab]

Will you ever learn?

I've been there from the beginning 'till the end: from when you stole the idea from Bertn and started your own collab, 'till you resubmitted thise for the second time.
I have nothing against the idea-issue, since that was solved ages ago, therefor, I'm going to give you a review about this collab only.

You had a great concept, an original idea, and I'll be honest: you did a very well job administrating and leading the collab. Yet, I'm very dissapointed to see how unfinished this looks. In offensive words: it is horrible.

Everyone can make mistakes, fine, but making them twice in a row is different thing. I'd suggest you try and upload your finished flash first, before submitting, as this was yet another failed attempt. I don't know if your computer is different than many other of us, but in my case, the music didn't loop. It stopped at a certain point and then I had to watch the whole collab without music. Quite frustrating. Not many people had voice, but those who had, had quite a bad quality. Sound: Horrible

You had some really impressive parts, especially Honto and Nukyew2's first part. In this case, the collab has a big contrast between good and bad. Either the part was very good, either it sucked. Yes, literally, sucked. You can't let an amateur animate and expect to get a good score. This is a bit what happened: the collab got filled with brilliant parts, while at the end, you just allowed some random people without judging them and you ended up with some very bad parts. It gives a nice contrast, -and I did enjoy the good parts-, so Graphics: Decently good.

Look, I think you did a great job leading this collab and you made a wonderful result, but it's just not finished yet. You need to learn and upload/test your flash before submitting, you just can't afford such problems to be happening. Same thing as in a play: you may not ever forget the script, else you fail.

I enjoyed the FbF, I enjoyed the original ideas, I enjoyed the good teamwork of the collab.
I disliked the sound, the little effort at the end and the hopeless parts.

I think you've made a good throw, but you just aren't there yet.

Superawesomeness responds:

This is the last time i'm gonna say this, I DID NOT STEAL THE IDEA. I saw his collab, and I got the idea from it. How was I to know that he was planning on making a Ninja Collab? I'm not psychic, sorry.

I did not expect this to get a good score. I wasn't planning on letting this collab go on for so long. This should have been submitted months ago. I submitted this twice to fix the playing problem. Would you rather watch the version that didn't play at all?

[The Pirate Collab]

Frontpage Material!

5/5
10/10

This will hit frontpage, and probably a daily!

Great job, every one of you, it was an honor to see all guys work so hard on this, especially you Bertn, and even thought my part failed, I still am happy to had known you guys!

Great show! Keep it up!

Bertn responds:

Thanks for this review Zerobeam and yea, I kind for missed your part. ):

[Everybody Jam!]

Thank you.

May He Rest In Eternal Peace, As He Has Been A Great Inspiration For Everybody.

Thank you for this movie.

ActiveObjectX responds:

Glad you enjoyed it.

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[Dreamboarding]

Little summary:

The mix between stop-motion and FbF was something I've never experienced before. You did not only prove that those two fit well, but in fact, you've created a whole new style. The music was well fitting, though I think there was a little delay at the end: I would've liked it better if the music went to it's 'hard-moment' when the board cracked, this would've brought an even better shock. Though overall, the music was well fitting. I'm really glad you can actually see you enjoy skating thanks to this flash.

As for your exam... I think you should wait before you see the others of your class, there is no need to worry about it now. I'm quite sure most used the traditional 'line-FBF', if you know what I mean. While this is also abstract, it's overdone. Your flash however, as titles Dreamboarding, is dream-ish. Dreams are abstract, last time I checked... ;) I think you'll be just fine, good luck with your exams, and of course, I hope to see more of you.

Cheers,
-Zerobeam

mraw responds:

Yeah the music was supposed to sync with the board snap but the music wasnt on stream, ive changed it now.
I agree with you, the 'single line' fbf stuff is waay overdone, I had to fill out the length and join some scenes together though :D
Glad you enjoyed it overall,
Cheers for the review!

[Happy Censorship Day!]

This rocks! <3

I love it. ^_^

It's really funny AND it's made for my friend Bertn! ;D

Keep going Bahamut and HEIL CENSORSHIP DAY! :3

kinggila responds:

Bertn censors too trucking much. :P

[Snowy Planet]

Scrap

Big piece of crap mainly, the only think i liked was the music, but it was just randomly taken, so i suppose i wouldn't judge it.

If you post this, then at least make some descent graphics on the guy, if it was a frame-by-frame animation, i would've liked it in that style, but it's just a movie clip moving up & down...

I really didn't like this.

CriTiaS-CreaTionS responds:

And I really don't like YOU.. what do you have to say to that eh?

[The GWB song]

So awsome ;)

Haha, yeah. It was a pretty good song! Just a little low framerate. Get's a lil boring. But it was fun, keep going!

PapaQ responds:

Thanks, yeah, the frames skip on some systems. I'm looking in to that.I'm glad it didn't affect your scoring too much.

[Heads, shoulders, knees..]

graphics R0cks!

WTF? Man, finally after a week a good flash entry! Your animation was good, a little slow but good! I don't have much too say. I only watched 10sec. of the movie and i know what to say: 'Great animation, your a real flash artist!' Im putting you in my favorites ;)

Boffomedia responds:

you should really watch it all, lollo.

[DIG]

WTF? Did you make this?

I expected some more 'flash' but ooook! Man, what program did you use? Swift 3d? I dunno but it damn good 3d! I don't really like the resolution, it sucked but thats not your foult ;) Nice work! It wont get blamed but it won't get the frontpage of te resolution i geuss. Still veery nice work!

Wanion responds:

A program called "The Movies" for PC. Join in on the fun!

[38 Hours Of My Life!]

Yeah, nice!

Very smooth animation! You did pur your time in this, nice! Just i don't get what the tile '38 hours of my Life!' has to do with your animation, plz explain. It's very random stuff, but why that title?
...We want more!

Sqeezy responds:

Because I spent 38 hours of my Life, to put my mind into this.