Will you ever learn?
I've been there from the beginning 'till the end: from when you stole the idea from Bertn and started your own collab, 'till you resubmitted thise for the second time.
I have nothing against the idea-issue, since that was solved ages ago, therefor, I'm going to give you a review about this collab only.
You had a great concept, an original idea, and I'll be honest: you did a very well job administrating and leading the collab. Yet, I'm very dissapointed to see how unfinished this looks. In offensive words: it is horrible.
Everyone can make mistakes, fine, but making them twice in a row is different thing. I'd suggest you try and upload your finished flash first, before submitting, as this was yet another failed attempt. I don't know if your computer is different than many other of us, but in my case, the music didn't loop. It stopped at a certain point and then I had to watch the whole collab without music. Quite frustrating. Not many people had voice, but those who had, had quite a bad quality. Sound: Horrible
You had some really impressive parts, especially Honto and Nukyew2's first part. In this case, the collab has a big contrast between good and bad. Either the part was very good, either it sucked. Yes, literally, sucked. You can't let an amateur animate and expect to get a good score. This is a bit what happened: the collab got filled with brilliant parts, while at the end, you just allowed some random people without judging them and you ended up with some very bad parts. It gives a nice contrast, -and I did enjoy the good parts-, so Graphics: Decently good.
Look, I think you did a great job leading this collab and you made a wonderful result, but it's just not finished yet. You need to learn and upload/test your flash before submitting, you just can't afford such problems to be happening. Same thing as in a play: you may not ever forget the script, else you fail.
I enjoyed the FbF, I enjoyed the original ideas, I enjoyed the good teamwork of the collab.
I disliked the sound, the little effort at the end and the hopeless parts.
I think you've made a good throw, but you just aren't there yet.
This is the last time i'm gonna say this, I DID NOT STEAL THE IDEA. I saw his collab, and I got the idea from it. How was I to know that he was planning on making a Ninja Collab? I'm not psychic, sorry.
I did not expect this to get a good score. I wasn't planning on letting this collab go on for so long. This should have been submitted months ago. I submitted this twice to fix the playing problem. Would you rather watch the version that didn't play at all?
This will hit frontpage, and probably a daily!
Great job, every one of you, it was an honor to see all guys work so hard on this, especially you Bertn, and even thought my part failed, I still am happy to had known you guys!
Great show! Keep it up!
Thanks for this review Zerobeam and yea, I kind for missed your part. ):
May He Rest In Eternal Peace, As He Has Been A Great Inspiration For Everybody.
Thank you for this movie.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Very neat game!
But it totally sucks playing it on a azerty keyboard... you should add in settings :(
Very neat though :)
Very good concept
I don't know if you made the engine yourself, but it's smooth, good, just perfect!
I love it and i really think this will get a good score! ;)
Whee, another flash!!!
I did'n really care about my score, i give it a 10, because it's also my art =p Anyway, i did'n know you where actually finishing this, althoughd it's good it also contains alot of crap, and i must say, alot of the crap comes from me. Those where just times when Bertn asked me to draw something, and i draw something (in 1 sec.!!) Wel eh, nice, only next time, contact me when your going to post it =p
Thanks for the review ZeroBeam! Nice review BTW.
Beautiful masterpiece here, matey :)
Makes me want to repair my ol' MIDI keyboard and start playing again. :')
Lochie, we all love you man.
Thanks for the great song for him.
Awesome sound :)
<3 u Lochie.
Who doesn't love him!
Praise Lochie! :D
Nice loop, you sick bastard :D
Thanks, you healthy fellow!
I am impressed by your music skills ;)
I've sended you a mail years ago, when blockhead 1 just came out, to ask what program you used to make music.
Now, I've already bought FL Studio, and made various songs!
So thanks for that.
About the song, it is a real good soundscape. It really gives a good, blurry-dark atmosphere. The use of the nice pads is really wonderful! I've been tring to get a hold of a few good synths, but mostly failed... Oh well, i'll keep trying!
Also, did you had music lessons, if so, for how long? It's just out of plain interest ;) I've been playing piano for almost 5 years now, so I like to meet up with fellow musicians as well! :)
Oh, and mind telling me how you've started? Did you start with plain tutorials and exploring yourself, or did you do anything else?
Haha, I'm sorry I went off-topic here, it's a wonderful soundscape and you should really be proud of your talents; as well in art and animation, as in music!
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